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Seven Reasons Why I Loved You. by ~Dibujando:iconDibujando:





i.

     seven hours
are spent waxing lyrical and
kissing your eyelashes in the library,
    studying.
you mouth the third knuckle on my right hand,
and memorize the hollow of my cheek.


                     ii.

                       tender kisses press like
          afterthoughts and postscripts on my forehead:
                       

                                    p.s. te quiero.


iii.

you inhale so beautifully.


                    iv.

                           i will remember your iceberg-words.
                           
                           the door slams with
                           a crash,
                           like a glacier being born.
                           you fall into me seven hours later,
                           breathing frantic apologies and
                           nervously fingering the arch of your nose.

                                    later i will think of
                             bruises on my thighs and
                                           smile

v.

bells of ireland grow rings around the old oak
                                     where we would sit in
                                       dust-mote halos,
                                autumned and marooned.

                       you have carved our names
                        on the trunk, like something
                                     sacred.
                         
                           
vi.

you would rather have died nobly than lived in vain—

and so you did.

                        

                             vii.
                             
                             was your favourite number.

©2006-2009 ~Dibujando
:icondibujando:

Author's Comments

This piece was really hard for me to write. For unknown reasons.

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Thank you for

I'm smiling.

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:iconxsweetxblasphemyx:
i haven't had to read the other 4544 of your poems and so don't need to sue you =) but i like this so much, its wonderfully written, unusual and thought provoking, i like iv especially x

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The tragedy of infant hearts. But it's ok we've got old blood and our hair is woven to the same hotel again. We're wearing down. This is the year of the party crasher, it's you and me, for the first time in history. We're history.
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:iconslaymaker:
Wow. This piece is very prettiful.

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I ish a kyootiful bloodeh
:iconxsweetxblasphemyx:
*nods wisely* i think the last one is nearest! and you're welcome x

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The tragedy of infant hearts. But it's ok we've got old blood and our hair is woven to the same hotel again. We're wearing down. This is the year of the party crasher, it's you and me, for the first time in history. We're history.
:iconsomehowhereagain:
Wow this one hit close to home... nice job

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I'm burning my candle at both ends
It will not last through the night
But ah my foes and ah my friends
It gives a lovely light...
:iconsuicidedreamer:
love you, beautiful

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:icondrippingwithwords:
totally totally love it... for reasons i cant even think of. just did. :)
:iconmrs-teague:
This is great stuff, i hope very much to be able to write as good as you one day :D

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:iconjane504:
Love it. It's really well written and it really hits you. You should be proud

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A name engraved on a weathered rock. A broken soul that the world forgot

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